范冰冰的道歉信走进中学课堂，语病太多成改错素材

来源：本站原创时间：2018-10-11 09:14:15

范冰冰逃税被开巨额罚单的事情前些天是告一段落了，但这些天她依然处在风口浪尖上。先是男友李晨发微博被骂，如今道歉信又被指出语病太多，甚至还被搬上课堂做改错素材。

对于范冰冰逃税一事的处理，除了相关部门开出的8.84亿的巨额罚单以外，随着而来的还有她在微博上发布的一篇长长的道歉信。谁知道歉信发布没几天就被网友指出语病太多，还有中学老师把它拿到语文课堂上当改错素材了。究竟有哪些语病，我们一起来看看今天的日常英语资讯。

一、范冰冰道歉信中的语病

国庆假期结束后，有网友晒出了这样三张照片。在某中学的语文课上，老师将范冰冰的致歉信放在了大屏幕上，并用红笔标注了语法、语病需要改正的地方和原因。这位老师就地取材，显得非常与时俱进啊。他列举了不下十处错误，这里为大家列举其中的几处语病。

1. 最近一段时间，我经历了从未有过的痛苦、煎熬……

分析：“经历”和“痛苦、煎熬”搭配不当，应该改为“我体会了从未有过的痛苦、煎熬”。

2. 在影片《大轰炸》和其他一些合同中出现利用“拆分合同”等逃税问题

分析：“影片《大轰炸》和其他一些合同”并列不当，改为“在影片《大轰炸》等影视作品的合同中”。

3. 我诚恳地向社会、向爱护关心我的朋友，以及大众，向国家税务机关道歉。

分析：逻辑关系混乱，改为“我诚挚地向国家税务机关、社会大众以及爱护关心我的朋友道歉”。

二、范冰冰道歉信中英对照

最近一段时间，我经历了从未有过的痛苦、煎熬，进行了深刻的反思、反省，我对自己的所作所为深感羞愧、内疚，在这里我向大家诚恳道歉！

Recently I have endured an unprecedented amount of pain, undergoing deep self-reflection and introspection. I feel ashamed and guilty for what I did, and here, I offer my sincere apology to everyone.

长期以来，由于自己没有摆正国家利益、社会利益和个人利益的关系，在影片《大轰炸》和其他一些合同中出现利用“拆分合同”等逃税问题，我深感羞愧。

For a long period of time, I have not upheld the responsibility of safeguarding the interests of my country and our society against my personal interests. I feel ashamed that I committed tax evasion in “Unbreakable Spirit” and other projects by taking advantage of “split contracts.”

这些天在配合税务机关对我及我公司的税务检查中，我一直深刻反省：作为一个公众人物，应该遵纪守法，起到社会和行业的模范带头作用，不应在经济利益面前，丧失自我约束，放松管理，以致违法失守。在此，我诚恳地向社会、向爱护关心我的朋友，以及大众，向国家税务机关道歉。

Throughout these days of my cooperation with the taxation authorities’ investigation of my accounts as well as my company’s, I have realized that, as a public figure, I should’ve observed the law, setting a good example for society and the industry. I shouldn’t have lost my ability to govern myself in the face of economic interests, leading myself to break the law. Here I sincerely apologize to society, friends who care about me, the public and the taxation authorities.

对税务机关调查后，依法作出的一系列处罚决定，我完全接受，我将按照税务部门的最终处罚决定，尽全力克服一切困难，筹措资金、补缴税款、缴纳罚款。

I completely accept the penalties given by the taxation authorities after their thorough investigation. I will follow the final order given by the taxation authorities and will do my best to raise funds to pay back the taxes and fines.

我从小喜欢艺术，又赶上了影视业蓬勃发展的好时机，在诸多前辈的提携和观众朋友的爱护下，加之自己的不断努力，这才在演艺方面取得了一点成绩。作为一个演员，我常为自己能在世界舞台上展示我国文化而自豪，并不遗余力为此冲锋。可以说，我每一点成绩的取得，都离不开国家和人民群众的支持。没有党和国家的好政策，没有人民群众的爱护，就没有范冰冰。

I have been an art lover since I was a child, and I’m also fortunate to have run into the rise of the film and television industries. Thanks to guidance from veterans as well as love from the audience, together with my own hard work, I have achieved a bit of success in my career. As an actor, I take pride in showcasing our country’s culture on the global stage, and I do my best to be in the forefront of this. My success owes to the support from my country and the people. Without the great policies of the [Communist] Party and the country, without the love of the people, there would be no Fan Bingbing.

今天，我对自己的过错深感惶恐不安！我辜负了国家对我的培养，辜负了社会对我的信任，也辜负了影迷对我的喜爱！在此，我再次向大家诚恳道歉！请大家原谅！

Today I’m facing enormous fears and worries over the mistakes I made! I have failed the country, society’s support and trust, and the love of my devoted fans! I offer my sincere apology here once again! I beg for everyone’s forgiveness!

我相信，经过这次整顿，我会讲规矩、遵秩序、重责任，在把好的作品献给大家的同时，也要监督公司管理，守法经营，诚实守信，争做富有文化内涵的好公司，为全社会传播正能量！

I believe that, after this incident, I will uphold the law and respect orders, as well as taking my responsibilities. While I will continue to produce great work for everyone, I will keep a close eye on my company’s management to ensure that my company abides by the law, building it into a great company that is cultured and has high integrity, in order to spread positive energy to society!

再次向社会，向一直支持我的影迷，向关爱我的朋友家人，真诚的说一句，对不起！

Again, I apologize to society and my devoted fans, as well as to my friends and family who care about me. I sincerely say: I am sorry!

这么多语病，看完不禁为范冰冰公关团队的语文水平担忧啊！不过范冰冰事件不但在国家税收方面为大众上了一课，还能够在语文的角度上给中学生再上一课，也算是很值得了吧。